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Thema: Starlight

  1. #1
    Avatar von -BloodyCloud-
    Dabei seit
    11/2014
    Bundesland
    Nordrhein-Westfalen
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    Nordbögge
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    Starlight

    Just coming home from Děčín,
    nomad without any home.
    Feel the exhaution on my skin...
    kepin' grime like a stone.


    Three days without any meal.
    The sun's incinerate woody meat
    on the road to felicity, made of steel.
    There's no time left for sleep.


    * * *
    Starlight's immortal.
    Please lift up your face.
    It's so wonderful when little elegy
    makes your eyes glow.
    Starlight's gonna be immortal
    when we're into space.
    Welded together by gravity,
    within feelings grow.
    * * *


    As the church proclaims the end of bell,
    I've done my work alright.
    Let myself go. The exploded cell
    still invisible. Still out of sight.


    I am outside, still not in the clear,
    searching the colour and the shape.
    Planet takes a bow, sunset is near...
    restrained pleasure gets awake.


    * * *
    Starlight's immortal.
    Please lift up your face.
    It's so wonderful when little elegy
    makes your eyes glow.
    Starlight's gonna be immortal
    when we're into space.
    Welded together by gravity,
    within feelings grow.
    * * *



    Warmth of cotton covers my soul
    as i explore the blues inside.
    A cup of tea, and a guitar's complaining stole
    the illusion of stride.
    You'd better need a glass shard to cut the strings...
    I'm thinking of, day by day.
    But I felt your arms, and touched your wings
    and you took me far away.




    o.o

  2. Nach oben    #2
    abgemeldet
    Dabei seit
    12/2016
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    Das ist ziemlich gut! Ein paar Reime könntest Du noch abrunden, aber ansonsten wirklich toll. Respekt.

  3. Nach oben    #3
    Avatar von Lollipop
    Dabei seit
    11/2016
    Bundesland
    Nordrhein-Westfalen
    Ort
    Duisburg
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    82
    Ich muss Carlos da vollkommen Recht geben!!

  4. Nach oben    #4
    Avatar von Nekochaaan
    Dabei seit
    04/2016
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    Still out of sight .... feel it...


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